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Thought-flower

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This

is a thought-flower,
blooming from a whirling river of the
massive ocean of creativity.

Here you go.
This flower is for you.

Put your nose to it.
Can you smell it?

...

Now smash! the delicate petals of this thought-flower. Let them fall to the ground, let them fly away in whatever ether there is around.

With all the petals gone,
One wonders,
what's left?


Luna -
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/96o0wi/comment/e420g7q

Digging for truth -
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/96bn7h/comment/e3zgsol

Posted Aug 12, 2018, 12:22 PM UTC · edited

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