Unread Messages (Dystopia)

Hey

Can you hear me?

I just got here

I'm surrounded by robots

Moving statues

Should I give in?

The temptation burns

Like acid rain

Eroding my insides

I'm so terrified

For me

For us

/

All I want is the warm hue of your light

You are my bedtime lamp

As I read through your story book

Turning page after page

Revealing every secret

Every flaw

Every fumbling confession

But you're not here

/

Everything is grey

Everything is dead

Trapped inside my internal dystopia

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