You are right! Thanks, the change has been made :)

I like this.

Maybe just "move to the ryhthm of life" rather than "move in rhythm of life"?

A small thing though. Good work.

Thank you! I will see what else I can add, maybe a stanza for all the sculptures out there. 

I like this. I think it got progressively less dense and kind of abstract, but it still is a great idea and I get what you’re going for. I feel there needs to be another stronger string of words (the beginning was the strongest) toward the end; maybe add another stanza to solidify the entire piece? Just throwing some ideas out for an otherwise good feeling poem!:)

Thank you! I used little moments of society as a way to capture writing. Not just poetry but also history. You can zoom in on any event that has happen and you can most likely find a poem or a book about it. At least that is what I was trying to capture.

Very good!


Very clever in noting the body involvement in pieces of artfullness: 
Painting, music, sex, ( what's this philosophy? photography? poetry? ) 

Especially clicking with me was the music stanza, magnifique! 

I only wonder about the  "little moments of society". I understand the artfullness to observe those subtle moments, but I don't get cleary what you mean due to the line "of society"? Is it because you didn't want to repeat "of life" perhaps? Forgive my boldly cast assumption. 

Very good read, good flow no hickups (except as per my analysis as above)

Thumbs up and thanks for sharing!

The greatest piece of art
 
is found in the movement
 
of bodies

&amp;nbsp;

the fluidity of the wrist

to paint the nakedness

of humanity

&amp;nbsp;


the speed of fingers

strumming and plucking

our souls

&amp;nbsp;


the sensuality of flesh

moving in rhythm

to life

&amp;nbsp;


the meticulous eye

capturing little moments
 
of society

&amp;nbsp;


Art is beauty

and beauty is movement

of bodies.

[one](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/97uyra/she/e4b4lnk/) [two](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/97ue0p/icarus/e4b528i/)

Art of Movement