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What They All Say

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I'm waiting for the apocalypse.

Guzzling rosary beads

like pills.

Jesus pills.

 

Arranged in neat little rows

like benzos.

 

It's a suicide with a happy ending I suppose

That's what they all say anyway.

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Posted Aug 17, 2018, 4:41 PM UTC · edited

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