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PCMLucifer

The way of spirals and circles

Feedback Received!

Over and over and over,
Again and again and again.
This spiral is leading me nowhere.
This spiral of unyielding pain.

Some say "Leave this path of torment,"
But there's something They don't understand.

I'm trying and trying and trying,
And yet I feel like I'm destined to fail.
Over and over and over,
Again and again and again.

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This is what happens when you have a poet who has been struggling with back pains for over a year.
NOTE: Sorry if my descriptions take away from the poem but I got this habit from tapas.io (where I started posting poetry) and I can't really shake it

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Posted Aug 18, 2018, 8:26 PM UTC

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