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ak47revolver9

New Friends, Old Foe

Feedback Received!

Hola,

Como estas?

I thought it was just us

But it wasn't.

I watched my world unfurl

twirling like a little girl

then swirling down the drain.

All alone and in pain

Cause the words in my brain

try to make me insane.

Like "no one wants you here

so steer clear.

Can't get near.

Take your daily dose of fear.

Check your phone.

You're alone."

I hope they text

But they don't.

Who am I?

"Just a lie.

Try your hand at death defy."

You'll see me cry

Wishing to fly

Saying goodbye from the sky.

It comes to this:

Searching for bliss

Searching in the deep abyss

I always look for what I miss

Searching for some happiness.


Ah, let me know what yall think?


[uno] (https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/98hplm/when_it_rained/)

[dos] (https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/98hwcs/sol_288/)

Posted Aug 19, 2018, 5:39 AM UTC

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