Warning Signs

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The signs said,

DANGER

BEWARE DEEP WATER

As if a man might read.

Even with those crystal clear

Contents, he'd still jump.

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The signs said,

DANGER

THIN ICE - KEEP OFF

As if a man'd obey.

Even though the birds made cracks

Around them, he'd still play

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And sure as day,

Deep waters ripple

Where ice, thin, cracked;

Bubbles rise up

As the fool

Slowly

Falls.

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EDIT: format. Seriously, anyone know how to format since the update?

  1. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/98xj7u/august_at_essex/e4jq31k
  2. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/98ueaz/rainbows_arent_dark/e4jth6s

Posted Aug 21, 2018, 3:47 AM UTC · edited

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