The Bed Game

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Allie and May played together a lot.

Pretending to go into space,

they’d get on a bed and become astronauts

who traveled all over the place.

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Planet Limargo was windy and wet

while Planet Tootilly was dry.

Their favorite planet was Fortootiyet

where spaceships were made out of pie.

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Alien life forms like Pantakiluks

would play hide and seek endlessly

and like them were creatures called Garniatuks

who’d hide from them under a sea.

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Muzpans were merry; they'd carry a pail

of marshmallows up a high hill.

There they would eat every one without fail

Then they'd go down and refill.

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Nifteenians’ grouchiness wasn't so nice,

They always shouted a lot

though you couldn't blame them as they were all ice

and Planet Nifteenia’s hot.

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Allie and May would imagine and play,

the bed was their trusty spaceship.

When time was up at the end of the day,

they'd say “Hey, when’s the next trip?”

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