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Painting of a wooden bowl of tabouleh

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Daylight heat on heavy pine table

a wooden bowl of fresh tabouleh: sweet, fragrant of herb

Gathering around

twelve monkeys carefully, curious

a snake, scaly white and black, waiting

a crow, the black eyed observer

piles of fine sand, golden in the sun

sad cubes of ice, slowly, dripping

thirsty butterflies, fluttering wings!

Overhead, overgrowing the horizon, a stormy foreshadowing.

 


Asking the question
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9a3x06/comment/e4swvm8

Coke and Marlboro
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9a5zwz/comment/e4szajc

Posted Aug 25, 2018, 9:18 PM UTC · edited

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