Pillow Thoughts

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Before I fall asleep tonight

I really should decide

When to go- is the fan on?

It’s kind of cool inside

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One day I’d like to build a boat

And sail- what was that sound?

I hope it was the ice maker

The stars are so profound

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Before I fall asleep tonight

I really- what would I do?

If I found a genie's lamp

Why is the ocean blue?

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If one tried to rob my house

I’d- what was her name?

We used to talk in science class

Do all the bugs feel pain?

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Before I fall- OH June fifth!

I knew I would recall!

Oh yeah, I should decide tonight

Tonight before I fall…

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Feedback:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9aa60d/the_secret_of_corruption/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9a4j7i/a_little_untitled_poem_for_my_first_post/

Posted Aug 26, 2018, 1:42 AM UTC

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