Drive

I drive in circles

In circles

in circles.

 

I drive past the drive-bys

and the funny farms

looking for an angel.

An enabler.

 

I drive by your house

Little Mouse.

At sunrise

on weekends.

 

(I guess there are lessons

I can't unlearn

 

So I drive in circles.

In circles instead.)

 

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