A once brilliant thing

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I am at once

fire and water

an inferno heart

not beating but burning

incrementally doused

drop by bitter drop

by tears from a river

the kind that carves

canyons from rock

not by power

but by persistence

until i am neither

fire nor water

but rubble

and ash

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/97ii35/do_not_alight_here/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/97ism9/broken_piece/

Posted Aug 27, 2018, 7:05 PM UTC

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