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A colossus awakened

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Spitting fire!
The Dragons of Helenia!
A deathly show,
hands and heads bloodied,
Masterpiece roasted;
brave punk-rock band!

Arsoned crititics:
An abominent show!
Art lovers:
Ambivalently recieved!
Age-agnostic children:
A hellas of a show!

Ground rumbling,
quipment raining from the scene
— and amongst the audience!

A colossus awakened!

 


3am coffee
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9b2m26/comment/e4zxu3w

bread is okay
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9b2v5v/comment/e4zywhf

Posted Aug 28, 2018, 10:52 PM UTC

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