Just started to write poetry(freestyle) and had writer’s block so I wrote about my insecurities🤷🏾‍♂️

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                     Insecurities 

Insecurities be plaguing my thoughts when I feel alone

All these dark thoughts ferment within my mind

Constantly bombarded by my demons I edge towards an emotional breakdown

But my pride forces me to hold it all in for those around me and myself

Within me is a never ending waterfall of rage that never seems to let up

Usually contained every so often my patience cracks allowing a hint of that rage to be experienced by the outside world

When the rage comes out I’m viewed as an abnormality in Society’s eyes

But no one sees the pain behind my eyes

No one sees the loving and kindness I long to obtain

No one sees the tortured soul behind the façade I put up waiting to be fixed

One day this broken mentality of mine will be repaired

But until then I shall continue to wait, going through the motions of life unsatisfied.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9bfq4f/the_whistle_blows/?st=JLG86FHO&sh=c97d28f6

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9b63yt/teeth_haiku/?st=JLG8JBWW&sh=c93e8bd0

Posted Aug 30, 2018, 6:52 AM UTC · edited

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