Asleep,

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To walk with will into umbral dark.

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To venture beyond broken boundary of tempered veil

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And to uknown realms without description.

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To speak to visions and thoughts unminded.

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To mingle with a forgiven strangeness

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Among the profound and half remembered.

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To lose one's names and become both act and audience

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In theater foreign and familiar.

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Is there crueler nightmare than to slip from such sweetened state

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And wake and live so mundanely?

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