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Calebdgm

Unfinished Compositions Thread!

This thread is for posting unfinished compositions:

  • pieces you don't know how to finish
  • pieces you don't want to finish
  • pieces you didn't finish in time for a past challenge (you can still post them in the challenge thread late when you finish them, but come the new month, feel free to post your progress for last month)
  • etc.

Ask for advice where you need it. You can post no matter how little you have. This is a place to learn and grow!

Posted Sep 2, 2018, 4:41 AM UTC

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LosBruun•

So this started out as as simple idea in G major, but as I just let it write it self, it has divulged into a myriad of scales. I think I've written myself into a corner, and I'd love ideas for how I should progress and how to fix some of the hokey transitions.

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illogicalinterest•

https://musescore.com/user/30120233/scores/5286554 HERE ! haha any ideas on finishing?

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account_username_•

Hello, r/MonthlyComposition!

Here's something I've been working on for the past couple weeks.

I don't have a whole lot of experience and I don't know a ton of music theory, but I have composed before. Here's the (kind of messy) score.

Areas in which I would like to improve, in no particular order: uniqueness, how cohesive it all is, transitions, effectively utilizing different instruments/sounds. There's probably a ton of other areas as well. I'm not sure exactly how to proceed from this point, and I feel like I might want to change the last bit, even.

Any feedback from anyone with any level of experience is appreciated. Thanks!

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Jazzfan15•

where do i go from here help me file:///C:/Users/deret/Desktop/frylles%20harmonie.pdf

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CalebdgmOP•

Hi there! It looks like you didn't upload your file correctly. Maybe you could try uploading the file to google drive and posting a link to that?

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