My first poem in a year and some change. Your thoughts appreciated.
A mango in Mar-a-Lago
Golfs and gorges his ego,
While singing a paean
And screwing a peon
As merrily our madness grows.
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Posted Sep 7, 2018, 2:11 AM UTC · edited
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