I rewrote my poem „I am“...

Title: Apart

You, my friend,
Are a part of me.

You, my family,
Are a part of me.

You, my country,
Are a part of me.

You, my culture,
Are a part of me.

Until one day,
I am me,
and no longer a part.

Is it too repetitive? I’m very happy with the ending but not sure about the rest. Also, English is not my mother language. This is for English class in Germany. I changed the links.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9fg9mh/comment/e5xgw22?st=JM135PJ5&sh=0e91fd62

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9fbr52/comment/e5xh0np?st=JM138552&sh=977091f5