The Good Tree
I wrote this immediately after a powerful dream in late 2001. I kept as true to the dream as possible. It is a simple and repetitive narration.
I was borne
on the wings of a dream
and they carried me to
a valley with a stream
it wound a course
through the barren floor
which was rocky and packed
with a deep red soil
and around one bend
right beside a cliff
grew a grand old tree
with a mighty girth
the tree split low
into two main limbs
and they both grew straight
tall and proud twins
the branches were large
and interspaced
they held to each other
and the rock cliff face
the tree tops rose
to a ledge in the cliff
where people have climbed
for thousands of years
the tree was good
somehow I know
it had always been there
watching mankind grow
in this dream
as I flew around
travellers came
and they sat them down
round the tree
and beside the stream
taking some rest
from the mid-day heat
they spread their blankets
and baskets of food
they played their music
with bells and flutes
the girls laughed and danced
all barefoot and free
and the boys did climb
up the cliff and the tree
the joy was real
and the kinship strong
and the people would clap
as they sang their songs
the tree was happy
somehow I know
it had seen this before
watching mankind grow
when the dance was good
and the tree grew old
where the cliff was high
and the stream ran cold
when all the people clapped
and the girls were free
while the boys climbed high
and played in the tree
when the flutes all sang
and the bells all rang
when the music was good
and the tree was pleased
up the tree
in the limbs of the twins
two brothers sat down
and with matching grins
each played his flute
with a rapid beat
and threw the song back
in a happy duel
there were many people on
the cliff and the tree
but one man stood
on the ledge above
I went up to him
and as the music played
the man was dancing
with his back to the tree
he was on the edge
and he jumped and clapped
and the music grew
both loud and fast
now the dance is good
and the tree is old
where the cliff is high
and the stream runs cold
all the people clap
and the girls are free
all the boys climb high
and play in the tree
while the flutes all sing
and the bells all tease
now the music is good
and the tree is pleased
I felt vertigo
as I watched him kick
feared he would fall
with a mis-placed step
there was a snake
twisting at his feet
it would undulate
with the stamping beat
it was long and black
and my instincts reeled
and I filled with fear
for the nimble man
but they seemed to move
with a common accord
so it was a dance
meant for snake and man
yet the dance is good
and the tree is old
where the cliff is high
and the stream runs cold
still the people clap
and the girls are free
still the boys climb high
and play in the tree
all the flutes keep singing
and the valley is ringing
still the music is good
still the tree is pleased
for through this valley
in our ancestor’s feet
all of us have gone
past the cliff and the tree
there has always been
the good tree and the stream
and there’s always been a snake
to dance with the man
as the music peaked
and was about to end
the man stopped his dance
and jumped to the tree
the music fell with a crash
and the time had come
for the people to move
and the dream was done
I felt as though
I had seen a great thing
to be in the valley
with the stream and the tree
where all of us have gone
some time before
in our ancestor’s time
through the valley floor
and as for the dance
with the snake and the man
I don’t know the meaning
and I don’t know the plan
but it seemed very real
always
the dance is good
and the tree grows old
where the cliff is high
and the stream runs cold
all the people will clap
all the girls stay free
all the boys will climb
and play in the tree
the flutes will sing
the bells will ever ring
for the music endures
and the tree is pleased
Posted Sep 28, 2018, 10:46 PM UTC · edited