Infectious Enthusiasm

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Her eyes, light up like a firefly

On a summer night.

How we missed that smile.

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Caterpillar in the spring

When the seeds were sown

Look how you've grown.

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Falling softly for a small eternity.

Head over heels,

Now, I can't feel my feet.

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Posted Oct 6, 2018, 6:49 AM UTC

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