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A Question

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What will happen, Father,

When I dunk my head in water?

Will all my sins wash away?

Or are they here to stay?

.

Are they baked into my history,

like something forever meant to be?

Does it even help when I pray to thee?

None of this seems clear to me.

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How long should I travel, Father?

Is the salvation I seek that much farther?

Or should I leave my homeland behind,

to purge these thoughts from my mind?

.

Or will I forever be done;

fighting battles I'll never see won?

Will they do me like the Lord's son?

Have I sufficiently built my cross to burn on?

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Posted Oct 8, 2018, 7:51 PM UTC

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