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A poem I wrote on an especially depressing day. (Would love advice)

Feedback Received!

Waking up to the bright days not a cloud in the sky but so refreshingly cold

It reminds me of the times of being in Minnesota with friends in family

Reminds me of waking up to friends in roommates in college

Remember that exciting feeling of childhood Christmas?

I woke up to a cold cloudless bright day.

Housemates had gone to work

I made myself soup

I woke up cold

I live alone

I woke

I

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Posted Oct 8, 2018, 9:14 PM UTC

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