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A Deep Breath

Feedback Received!

Inhale

The Light

Feel the goodness of the universe

Let it seep into your core

Exhale

The Darkness

Cast out the evils of the world

Release them from your soul and inhale again

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I am new to the world of poetry and looking to improve. This is just something that came into my head today. Thanks for your feedback!

edit: typos and spacing

Posted Oct 15, 2018, 7:19 PM UTC · edited

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