Message in a bottle

Message in a bottle

I have let go to the blue sea

Hopefully it'll travel

To the lighthouse I always see

Lighthouse on a stunning cliffed coast

Sailing ships want to reach

Mine is just a bottle at most

With a message I'll preach

The current in the sea

Drags both the bottle and ship

Without the light they need

One will vanish, and one will tip

Wailing winds and wayward waves

Setting suns and scorching sands

Freezing nights and rainy days

Nothing is kept in these land

No richess

No name

No glory

No fame

Just your deeds

Just your heart

Just dont weep

When you part

This is my first try at poetry, how can I improve?

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