To Do

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"To do"

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  1. Hurry, set up camp, evening's coming soon

  2. Stop and take some pictures, wildflowers in bloom

  3. Crack open the cooler, we worked up a thirst

  4. Set up the telescope, but let the sun set first

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  1. Build up the fire, it'll be cold tonight

  2. Admire my compatriots, eyes glowing with firelight

  3. Take a deep breath in, time to relax

  4. Let a deep breath out, stretch out on our backs

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  1. Dream of tommorrow, engulfed by mother Earth

  2. Awaken to the sun, bathe in Gaia's mirth

  3. Take a sip of sunrise, sunset's fraternal twin

  4. Get stoned on innocent wilderness, nature knows no sin

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  1. Hot coffee for breakfast, headed home this afternoon

  2. A few more years of work, make this place home soon

  3. Humid air for lunch, the sky is getting cloudy

  4. Stay a little longer, friends are feeling rowdy

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  1. Drive home is quiet, we're all feeling blue

  2. Let's ferment these memories, make a sacred brew

  3. Next time we're together, we'll drink a bottle or two

  4. And when we're good and drunk, we'll make a new "to do"

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Posted Oct 25, 2018, 3:21 AM UTC

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