Dragonfly and I

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###Dragonfly and I


A dragonfly danced in the shower

Swirling round the cold water stream.

Flew over the lamp, tall like tower

While I hummed a song, soft and sweet.

 

My company he must have found dull

For when he saw thin lines of silk,

The dragonfly excited fluttered:

"This eight-legged loner needs a kiss"


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EDIT: Made several changes because the poem didn't make sense. Thanks u/LazarusWolff

Posted Oct 27, 2018, 3:09 PM UTC · edited

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