Another chance!

Feedback Received!

Cruising down entrancing shores,
lazuline memories beckon to me.
As emerald eyes open the doors,
sparkling diamonds stare at me.

Bygone times rippling through
deep azure in dappled light.
Wistful smiles take their cue
from Li Galli's longing sight.

Circling turquoise slips away,
taking regrets left unknown.
Silver gleam lights our way,
from those caverns we'd known.

Tyrrhenian sea of blue fire,
igniting our luminous lair.
Glowing bays of sapphire,
rekindling what we left there.

Crystalline oars begin to roll,
paddling corals to and fro.
Confusion besets the soul,
reach forward or let it go?

Playful shells in teal grottoes,
whisper secrets sealed within.
Throwing dice of soft echoes,
losing game of hearts, to win!

Cerulean gaze tugs at me,
drawing into shimmering dance.
Siren's call entices me,
yet again for another chance!

 

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