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sarawanh

After-Affairs (Haiku)

Feedback Received!

Red lights in the rain

The rear view refracting signs

Love's glow screaming -- stop

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Note: I have reservations about the word "screaming" and considered replacing it with "screeching." Thoughts?

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Posted Nov 10, 2018, 11:21 PM UTC

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