This is me

This isn't a sport it's a part of me
Something I've always taken seriously
This isn't a sport it's a philosophy
Through thick and thin, it has stuck with me
This isn't a sport It's my past present and destiny
It's something I'll keep doing
As long as there's a living breath in me

This is Judo
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Feedback 3 (I didn't use this ones as second feedback because the author told me he intentionally wrote the lines a I talked about the way he did ... I still wanted to include it though)