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emptyj

I either won the litter or killed myself, I don’t know

Feedback Received!

The day has come

No one saw it coming

The clouds meet the sun

And I started running

— —

It made my eyes yellow

Gave my groin some green

Thought I was that fellow

But she’s too good for me

— —

This time I won’t waste it

I’ll tell her soon enough

My love hasn’t gone to waste yet

But I’ll call out her bluff

— —

What I thought love was friendship

A misread was cause to end it

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9wiiju/comment/e9kw09e?st=JOEUJMEH&sh=9aa87b95

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9whcup/comment/e9kwfdo?st=JOEUQKUJ&sh=867f5265

Posted Nov 12, 2018, 10:03 PM UTC · edited

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