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There is a soft roundness in the burrow

Once in a while, something stirs its attention

Its ears perking from their previously relaxed position

Nose twitching as a sweet scent fills the air

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And suddenly, all becomes blurred

Thump, thump, thump

Deft paws gaily jumping

Small heartbeats quickening

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And the rabbit stops,

Flopping contentedly to its side

It lays without a care in the world.

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Posted Nov 16, 2018, 9:05 PM UTC

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