Liar

Feedback Received!

When she left,

I said I was ok.

When my friends asked how I was,

I said I was ok.

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When she ended it over the phone,

I said it was ok.

When my mom asked how my grades were,

I said they were ok.

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When I went on my first date since her,

I said I wasn’t getting ahead of myself.

When it was all over,

I said I was ok.

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When my dog started to limp,

I said he’d be ok.

When it didn’t get better,

….

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When my coworkers asked me how I was,

I said I’m ok.

When the customers asked me how my day was,

I said pretty good.

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When my mom said our dog might have lymphoma,

I said I understood.

When my mom said we may have to put him down,

I didn’t cry.

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When I touched his fur,

When I felt him breathe,

When I cried in my car,

When I realized I wasn’t ok.

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When I decided I couldn’t lie anymore,

I said ok.

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Feedback Provided:

  1. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9yce6i/love/ea0pgaa
  2. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9y5jmo/i_dont_know/ea0q4ua

Posted Nov 19, 2018, 6:05 AM UTC · edited

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