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xanga_ghost

jukebox discord

Feedback Received!
Mister jukebox repairman -
please come fix, this diner's music.
When dead Patsy Cline comes on,
my eyes do not close nor my hips,
gently sway.

There must be a lazy gear some
where between the chorus andthehippocampus.

I insist that you hurry
because the next track, is one people snap fingers to
and, my dancing is
Bad and my fries
have grown cold so, eating won't distract me
from the words.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9z77la/an_argumentative_retort_to_charles_bukowski/ea6w1uj

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9z2b4q/uncertainties/ea6whx8

Posted Nov 21, 2018, 9:31 PM UTC

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