[1029] Stormheilm- Sci-Fi/Fantasy 60k YA Novel

So, in hindsight, I have worked on the introduction a couple times. I realized that it had to be re-written too compel the reader to continue the story and I think I got it to a somewhat good intro.

Short Blurb: For centuries, the two dominant royal families of Stormheilm have protected the existence of the human race after its near-destruction by a renegade artificial intelligence. Nathaniel Fehr trained his whole life to become Stormheilm’s next king. But then a mysterious apparition tells him he will fail unless he kills his illegitimate half-brother, known as the “Child of Prophecy”.

I posted more then the prologue on here before and got some great feedback. If you could all be so kind to give me some insight to your advice/opinion I would appreciate it.

Prologue

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