First post my dudes, I do take criticism

Here's "Rusty helmet", I didn't spend enough time on the top part but it still looks good... I hope. that weird face is a doodle i made to test the pen i was using, but it's goofy enough to become my signature

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go ahead and show me the problems and how to fix them if you want

https://i.redd.it/s5qte52i3k221.jpg