Emailing admissions post interview

I interviewed at my top choice a month ago and haven't heard back. They said to reach out after 4 weeks so I wanted to email them tomorrow morning to follow-up:

Dear Admissions Committee,

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Thank you for giving me the opportunity to interview at your school. I had a great time meeting the students/faculty and learning about the medical school here at XX. Interview day further reinforced my desire to attend your school for my medical education and if accepted, I will definitely matriculate. I interviewed on November 16th and have not heard back and just wanted to follow-up regarding your admissions decision. I look forward to hearing from you.

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Sincerely,

LeJon

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I'm not sure if this is the best way to go about it: should I keep it short as is, or should I add why I want to attend/what I can bring to the school, etc?

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