I'm not sure what you were going for here. Is she sad or pissed off?
The subject is hiding so much of her face it's hard to tell what exactly she's feeling. I also would have liked to see more of the tattoo(?) on her hand.
On a more technical note, the motion blur in her hand and out-of-focus pattern on the couch distract from the subject.
Did you take more photos at the same time? Maybe posting several as a series would help show the mood of the subject.
I notice you have another version of the same image. It looks like it's been color-corrected, which helps the shadows, but I think I prefer the higher contrast of this print.
I'm not sure what you were going for here. Is she sad or pissed off?
The subject is hiding so much of her face it's hard to tell what exactly she's feeling. I also would have liked to see more of the tattoo(?) on her hand.
On a more technical note, the motion blur in her hand and out-of-focus pattern on the couch distract from the subject.
Did you take more photos at the same time? Maybe posting several as a series would help show the mood of the subject.
I notice you have another version of the same image. It looks like it's been color-corrected, which helps the shadows, but I think I prefer the higher contrast of this print.
she just doesn't like getting her picture taken. so she was neither sad nor pissed off. i think she totally looks like she's crying though.
there are a few others, but this is the only one i liked. the other version is a negative scan from walgreens. thanks for the input.