r/photocritique•16 yr. agoforminghere's one of my housemate natalieflickr.com/photos/forming/4323321002/sizes/l/flickr.comPosted Feb 2, 2010, 4:34 AM UTC03ShareSave
The DOF is great, just the framing really bothers me. Portraits are one of the things I feel should always be using the rule of thirds, unless you're not shooting in landscape, but in portrait. A simple crop would help here. I love the color tone.
I agree, cropping would help.
That being said, I also love the color, and her smile! The hair out of the hood is nice.
thanks ya'll. where would you crop it? take out the right side? i'm curious.