CaptainBenzieContent Creator•

A good start to CnC Rivals content, and you make some interesting points and you've definitely got the "YouTubers Gab", the ability to just keep talking!

As some constructive criticism, the video is long for what it is. I made this exact mistake on my first attempt at shoutcasting, I rambled on about a lot of irrelevant stuff. In the nicest way possible, nobody is here to listen to how your audio didn't work out first time (I've been crucified for this!) so don't focus on it.

Once you're in the swing, the video is pretty good, but it just takes a lot of skipping ahead to get there, and that's going to put many people off.

Little nit-picky note too, this wasn't the Top Nod Deck last season, as Cyberwheels weren't there for it, but it's a close variant of the traditional Nod Aggro (which is either 2/2/2 Lasers/Flames/Bikes/Scorpion/Venom/Banshee or 3/3 M/L/F/AB/Buggy/Scorpion).

I look forward to seeing more content from you! A promising start.

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codeyawnOP•

Thx for the feedback

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kenjzh•

The narration was a stream of babbling. I don’t know what else to say people. I feel as though if I had told a chef, “Too much salt.” then you all would be crying about that, too.

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Wanyany•

Watched the video but don't understand, a lot of what you were saying was just not really interesting to me. On the first game, I don't understand why your opponent did use level 6 units in diamond games and the second game is just showing someone panic playing. Your deck may be good but isn't a playstyle I like.

This type of video "Top op deck" and else, I don't find them really useful anyway, sad that I found a lot of them while trying to find your channel, showing a good deck isn't going to help a bad player. You could try something that explain in which situations specific units are useful or not, this would help new players.

Hope my english is understandable.

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kenjzh•

Babbling nonsense.

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CaptainBenzieContent Creator•

You ever stop to think that there are humans on the other end of your rudeness? Did your mother never teach you to be polite, or did she lock you in the basement before she got to that lesson??

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kenjzh•

My comment was actually intended as a warning to other people on the internet, rather than as a compliment to you. Your video is so bad that it’s offensive to consume. Is that better? My advice would be to move on to the next project, rather than doubling down on this one.

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CaptainBenzieContent Creator•

It's not my video, but again, you don't explain why.

"This dinner was bad" doesn't help.

"The taste was off as you'd mixed unusual flavours, which I don't think worked. You used too much salt, and I think it was too expensive. That said, I did like the presentation." Useful feedback.

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Akindmachine•

Dude way too harsh. That attitude squashes a lot of potential good in the world.

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kenjzh•

So far I’m the only person who has given him any useful feedback. Saying nothing at all or deluding him into thinking that his video a special butterfly helps no one.

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Kalestraza•

Attacking someone because they gave their view on something is silly, if he watched the video and thought the lad was babbling nonsense then that's entirely valid feedback.

We're on the internet, if you can't handle people being rude then putting yourself out there is going to be a bad idea right off the bat.

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CaptainBenzieContent Creator•

My sincerest apologies for wanting to hold humanity to a higher standard than was displayed here. My sincerest apologies for thinking two human beings can have an interaction without one of them having to be nothing but rude.

That original response offers NO constructive criticism. It gives NO explanation behind the comment. It's just rude, a basement dwelling moron getting his kicks from the anonymity offered by a keyboard and monitor.

Had the original response contained any redeeming qualities and offered any insight, fair enough, but as it was literally just a teardown, I stand by my response to it.

It takes a lot to make content and put yourself out there and the more content this game has, the better. Slamming someone for trying, not cool.

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Kalestraza•

You honestly believe that Kenjzh REALLY needs to elaborate on that comment for it to be useful? it's very easy to infer from that comment alone the presentation may lack consistency, the information may not be correct and there may be extraneous segments which are of no relevance.

All it would take is a quick rewatch of your video with "babbling nonsense" in mind to see where the above may / may not apply and adjust accordingly.

Slamming someone may not be polite, nor may it be encouraging but it is completely valid and as a content creator myself I feel that people need to learn to accept it early on, especially if they plan to distribute their content to an audience that has alternatives and doesn't care about you personally as things will only get worse the larger you become.

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