[Feedback] A Faustian Haggle (Dark Comedy, 7 Pages)

Logline: A pathetic man tries to sell his soul to the devil, who refuses to take it.

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Genre: Dark Comedy/Fantasy

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Synopsis: A fat slobbish man tries to summon the devil and sell his soul for life of fame and fortune. The devil refuses this deal because he thinks that the person's soul is not that valuable. The two go back and forth and haggle over the man's soul.

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Please be completely honest and brutal when reviewing this script in terms of the story, writing, dialogue, characters, etc. I'm fairly certain that my script has a lot of formatting issues, so feel free to point any out and I'll be sure to fix them.