r/fantasywriters•7 yr. ago[deleted]Please critique my duel scene. Let me know what kind of images it invokes. (Tales from Talina|Nameless|2106 words)Critiquedocs.google.com/document/d/1-8gjzKvhU_xkMF1nF...docs.google.comPosted Jun 4, 2019, 3:24 PM UTC54Share