Thank you I appreciate it, sometimes I feel like I get to caught up in rhyming so I cut it out but it always winds up going in that direction. I appreciate it!

I'm a sucker for poems that have good flow and rhythm, I think this poem is strong in both. I think we've all been in a situation before where the only way to numb ourselves, ('drowning our demons' comes to mind) is to get drunk and try and escape when feeling overwhelmed. The idea of having control by deciding to have no control for a while.   


Good job!

4 is my lucky number thank you for your policing I’ll take your advice in that, new to the board! :)

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