Two Sides

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Civility

Wilderness

Both are words of power

Stability

Fickleness

Both a soul may sour

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Both are needed to balance

Much like yin and yang

But if one is power and the other naught

The soul is left to hang

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So here you stand bearing down

In the eyes of two growling wolves

And question for the freedom now

Or bear down upon the rules

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It's simply true, which side you take

As long as you grow to understand

For plans are not a guiding map

For luck and fate play a hand

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The paths shall lie before you now

Ever so bold and so true

And which path we choose to stand

If we ever had such a clue

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So remember this my dearest child

And be sure to listen well

That memories are not a fault or wonder

But more like a victory bell

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See each path we've made, and each we've saved

And each we've yet to sew

All are memories and hopes and dreams

So we may always so boldly go

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I wrote this awhile ago and figured I'd share. I would love some feedback and know what I can improve on.

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Edit: for the E at the end of clue. Thanks for pointing it out!

Posted Jul 14, 2019, 3:36 PM UTC · edited

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I loved this! Not much in feedback, however its message couldn’t have come at a better time. Truly thankful!

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