[lyrics][discussion] Inside

First post regarding any of my musical stuff (solo artist). Looking for some feedback on these lyrics I wrote. Probably the first one I’m proud of, as I’m usually anal about my lyrics and give up a lot. Also not sure which direction to take it.

Inside

Verse 1

When I was young, I

I Used to believe all the voices in my head

I used to believe that they were my friends

And they were there to help me understand

Why we disappear in the end

Why we disappear in the end

Ohhh

Verse 2

When I was young, I

I used to believe in a god

I used to believe that he was my friend

And he was there to help me understand

Why we disappear in the end

Where we all go to in the end

Pre/chorus

You’re hiding on the inside

I’m dying to let you know

I’ll meet you in the other side