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I had a dream last night

I wandered in a warehouse

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I don’t know why there

But there I was, still

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I walked around

With a stick of gum,

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With its tin in my hands,

I gripped its metal

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I touched its lightning

And I was its battery

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I danced around

A steely warehouse

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With green foil in

My hands

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And electricity in

My blood

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But I short-circuited

Malfunctioned

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Error

Error

Error

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Reboot

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I had a dream last night

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EDIT: formatting

[a hundred hands, by u/soap_mp4](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/dzleks/a_hundred_hands/f8a18r9?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x)

[Unsplit, by u/rabbitsarereallycool](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/dzbe7h/unsplit/f8a0gkn?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x)

Posted Nov 22, 2019, 1:37 AM UTC · edited

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