First time posting for critique, give me your worst!

Hey writing reddit, here is the first sorta-chapter from a piece I have 8 or 10 similarly length chapters, I hope to one day tie it together into a novel. I don't have any dreams of being a writer I just want write a book, even if it sucks.

constructive criticism appreciated.

link: https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=13W_ZR9p5KySnvU6WyPcW37Ma1FJIM1wKmvWKvkAJI1w