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Thank you all for your wonderful feedback! I've tried to give this another shot with your suggestions in mind! :-)
"#Disconnected"
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Why do I care
That I don't have more?
My wall says it all
My caption says more
My hashtag is clever
It is what we recall
A picture tells the story
A thousand words they say
It's important to me
To capture this day
To a concert, we go
It's like a dream
We record it
We never watch it
It's a common theme
The stories get told
24 hours they stay
They're easier to sell
Go ahead, hit replay
The satisfaction of views
Every hour I must check
They keep climbing higher
Now I won't be a wreck
Oh hey, Tom!
Thanks for the like
At least someone appreciates
The time and effort
I put into this hike
What would I do
If I couldn’t post
The moments I hold
So dear and so close
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What would happen if I didn't care anymore?
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/e1p3no/the_courthouse/
Posted Nov 26, 2019, 6:58 AM UTC · edited