If only

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i wish i could be taken away in that moment of peace again

The way the light formed subtle bundles through the mist

The way the leaves slowly fell from the trees

The way it was silent

As if time had stopped

The way i received a glimpse

submerged within

It invited me

To beyond

Where i would listen to the silence as if it would be music

Where i would enjoy the leaves as if they were dancing

Encased in hesistant light

If only i was able to go

If only it would take longer

If only wishes came true

Then maybe , that moment would show itself again

if only i wish i could be taken away in that moment of peace again

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Posted Nov 27, 2019, 11:41 PM UTC · edited

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