bait

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beware of cutting yourself goodnight
    and crying yourself to sleep –
above the roofs and inside the rooms
    they’re waiting for you to bleed.
if your soul is damaged and your body is hurt,
    lock your windows and doors.
to those who won’t listen: my condolences.
    and welcome to the new clan of yours.

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This is my second post in this subreddit, and again I'm trying to make a proper attempt at writing in English, which is not my native language. And just like before, I'd appreciate any tips on grammar, vocabulary etc. as much as I would love to read about your impressions of the content and emotional component.

(Also I wonder if the acrostic is noticable.)