[Prompt Inspired] “Surprise Love-Bites.”
This piece was originally submitted as a response to this prompt by u/macktosh.
She loved it when he bit her.
Helena pressed her hands against the cold, cinderblock wall as she was forced up against it. She barely registered the shocking drop in temperature, however; too preoccupied with the other things happening to her.
She let out a moan as he sunk his teeth into her again. She didn’t feel pain with it, just a pinch and some pressure... Right there on the spot Cedric knew drove her wild.
They had done this a dozen or so times in the last few months since Cedric had started working for the warehouse - exclusively night-shifts. He was in his mid-thirties; dark, tall, and mysterious, with a thick, suave, vaguely European accent that nobody could quite place...
He was exactly Helena’s type.
“Fuck!” She moaned again as he hit a sensitive spot.
Her shirt was pulled up over her breasts, the cups of her bra shoved beneath them. Cedric tweaked one pink nipple as he bent her over against the wall, his chest to her back.
Both their pants were around their ankles as they stooped there. Her legs were spread just wide enough to be comfortable to stand with while giving him enough room to take her. His hips smacked against her arse with every pounding thrust.
Helena loved the way he toyed with her; finding a rhythm that shot static through her body every time he filled her up. He went slow, making sure she had almost just enough time to come down before he slammed into her again. Slowly, though, he was working them both up to their climax.
He bit her neck every time they made love, as well. Always in one of the same few spots, knowing it made her crazy. He lavished so much attention on her neck, even after all of the rest of the foreplay and teasing was done with, that she was convinced he had some sort of fetish for it...
Not that she was complaining, when it gave her so much pleasure, too. Her midnight-to-eight-o’clock shifts overseeing the stock of a packing-supply producer’s warehouse were often long and boring... But, since she had approached Cedric, that one fateful night, she had had to drop “boring” from that description.
“Fuck!” She cried again. “Fuck yeah! Oh! Cedric!”
He suckled at the tender spot on her neck as he kept railing her. He cupped her swinging breast in his hand and squeezed as he increased the severity of his pace.
“Mmmmph!” Helena bit back another moan, her les shaking as her lover edged her closer to her limit, faster.
With an audible sound, his lips were off her neck, and his hand was off her breast as he stood upright behind her.
Through a disappointed groan, Helena looked over her shoulder just in time to see his hands take hold of her hips. He paused for a moment, looking her in the eyes, smiling. Then he slammed into her again.
This was something new from him. Rough and discordant, with no rhyme or timing to the thrusts. Helena squealed with delight as he took her in new fashion, with none of the predictable patterning he had adhered to each time they had been with each other before. What he did now, as his cock sank into her pussy, was erratic and experimental. It was pleasure-seeking... Hedonistic.
“Ohhh!” Helena almost screamed. “I’m gonna- Gonna- Gonna cu- AHHH!”
As she teetered on the edge, she felt Cedric lean over her again. One hand snaked around her waist, searching for, finding, and playing with her clit as he balanced himself. His other hand stayed on her hip, pulling her into his hips with each new stroke.
She could feel his breath on her cheek.
She could feel his skin against hers.
She could feel his teeth on her neck again, but on the other side as where he had bitten her before.
She screamed again as the new pleasure overwhelmed her, jolting against the wall, herself, as she felt her skin pinch. Her core tightened around her lover as he pounded into her and fiddled with her button. Moisture ebbed down her thighs and slickened his as he continued.
Another minute or two went by as she tensed in the throes of her climax, and then he shuddered with his. He was still deep in her belly when he expended himself. Pulsing and twitching into her, he stood in place as they came with one another, his mouth claiming her neck through the whole of it.
Finally, they broke apart, his release slowly dripping from her as she turned and leaned against the wall.
“Fuck...” Helena breathed, sinking to the floor, covered in sweat. “Fuck that was good...”
“I’m flattered.” Cedric commented, sitting next to her. “Really pleasing you must be difficult.”
“It is...” Helena laughed, rubbing her neck where he had bit her. “But, when someone pulls it off, it tends to make me really hungry... You mind?”
“Huh? Oh. No, go ahead.”
She smiled in response to his permission. Kicking her jeans off her ankles, she stood on her knees and shimmied to the side, turning to face Cedric as she straddled him.
She kissed him, sitting on his lap.
Then she opened her mouth, baring two small, sharp fangs as she leaned to the side of his neck and bit him.
He let out a light sigh as she sank her teeth in. There was little pressure - the fangs so sharp - and no pain - her saliva acting like a local anesthetic. She licked the small piercings closed as she had drunk what she thought she safely could from him, and kissed the spot she had bit for good measure.
A lightly-tanned, athletic blonde who seemed in her late-twenties, Helena had been a vampire for more than three centuries... She did not look the part; did not conform to what most humans stereotypically thought vampires would look like. Cedric was closer to that image than she was. If asked to point to the vampire in the room, most people would choose the enigmatic yet suave European, not the yellow-haired American beach bunny... But, in this instance, they’d be wrong.
“Be real with me, Cedric...” Helena spoke as she lifted her head and looked at him again. “Do you bite all your girlfriends’ necks like that, or do you just do it to me as payback?”
She laughed at the look of sudden distress that washed across his face.
Night shifts definitely weren’t boring anymore...
Questions, comments, constructive feedback always welcome! Hope you enjoyed!
Posted Mar 12, 2020, 6:22 AM UTC · edited